May 6, 2009

fail blog #2

I mis-used the semicolon in the first line of fail blog one.

How humiliating--even if it was just a type-o.

Unfortunately I am too proud to change it. I will use this as an opportunity for a lesson: a semicolon connects two complete thoughts. A colon begins a list. Or creates a wonderful dramatic pause.

That was a fragment.

Illustration complete.

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